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Sunday, June 19, 2016

movie review


WALT write a review.

SHORT ANIMATED FILM
PIGEON IMPOSSIBLE
MARTELL ANIMATIONS

THERE IS A SPY NAMED WALTER BECKETT WHO LIVES IN  WASHINGTON D.C.
THEN A MAN SECRETLY GIVES WALTER A BRIEFCASE HE SITS ON BENCH AND OPENS it WHILE HE WAS EATING A BAGEL. THEN A PIGEON COMES AND LOOKS AT THE BAGEL AND WANTS TO EAT IT. SUDDENLY THE PIGEON ATTACKS THE MAN HE QUICKLY THROWS THE BAGEL AND THE PIGEON WHEN FOR IT BUT THE PIGEON ACCIDENTLY fALLS IN THE BRIEFCASE AND CLICKS ALL SORTS OF BUTTONS. THE MAN TRIED TO GET IT BACK BUT THE PIGEON SHOOTS LASER BEAMS AND MINI ROCKETS EVERYWHERE IT WAS……………. CHAOS!

I DIDN'T LIKE Walter’s FACE BECAUSE his nose was too big and it made him look UGLY. Spies should look cool and walter was not cool. Also WHEN A GIRL SCREAMed IT WAS TOO LOUD AND I DIDN’T LIKE IT WHEN THE PIGEON DIED.

I did LIKE IT WHEN THE PIGEON CAUSED lots of DESTRUCTION BECAUSE IT WAS SO FUNNY, i like seeing things blow up!

I also LIKED IT WHEN THE PIGEON PRESSED RANDOM BUTTONS on THE LAPTOP inside the BRIEFCASE because it caused chaos and was super duper funny.

Overall I liked the film and would recommend watching it.
I give the short animated film a 5 out of 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍👍
because it has no talking and any kid who might not know much english can understand what is happening by looking at the screen.

Wednesday, March 9, 2016

angry birds characters

WALT describe a character
red
A small red feathery angry ball is ready to kill the green creatures.his dark monobrows stick out of his head,his yellow beak is razor sharp.he has three dark red spots on both sides of his face.and has two round eyes.ed has two red feathers sticking out of his head and three black feathers sticking out of his tail.red doesnt have any special abillities but really strong on wood,stone and ice.red gets angry really easily and hethinkthe wind is the sound of the pigs going too war.As a leader red care alot about his friends and tries to keep the eggs safe.
THE END

Sunday, February 21, 2016

SIX SENTENCE STORY



Super man was saving the world normally.
He lived on the ground by a dirty village next to a river where there were not much people
His special ability was to do parkour around anyone or anything without getting noticed.
The treasure was cursed and one day someone swiped some and got away
The dog and the cat felt tired because they were strong and kept fighting too much.
Fangster proves that instead of killing people, they should help people. (It worked!!)


.Gianni William,Tai,SANGGUN, Alex, Christopher.

.THE END.

Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Writing


Egypt
what I can see pyramids, sand, sky,sand stone, camels.
feeling
hot,thirsty,sweaty,lonely and little bit sad.  





Mummies are inside the pyramids in egypt There's so many mummies that the pyramid explodes.
Mummy are so strong they can kill people and animals in 1 shot.

Mummies are dead kings covered with cloth.

The mummies are so scary it would
KILL OTHER MUMMIES

climbing up a pyramid I climbed the pyramid like a crazy mummy


I was as tired as a snail running as fast as It can